http://www.myspace.com/beafanofdeazy
its on the page
what do u think???
thanks for the comments!
2007-11-06 02:46:59 · 3 answers · asked by K_Dizzle35** Y!A_MoSt HaTed!* 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Other - Music
I checked it out.
The rhymes are good, but my brutally honest opinion is that you need to practice more. Control your breath. It sounds like you've just run a marathon.
My advice, ask one of your friends to coach you through your next recording. You need a producer who can look at your art with a different perspective. Make them tell you that your voice is rushed, or you can hear each breath, or you tripped over a word, or that the music breaks between lyrics need some more sizzle. (Try a breakdown??)
2007-11-06 02:55:42 · answer #1 · answered by Rick W 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The music reminds me of Prince when he was in his Jazz/Funk experimental stage of the late 80s. The rap is good but not unique and the production of the vocals is a bit too loud for the production of the music, but overall, I did enjoy it and will listen to it again! It's old school with a new school twist. ;P Keep rappin'
2007-11-06 10:54:16 · answer #2 · answered by Army Of Machines (Wi-Semper-Fi)! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You appear to be very talented............pursue your dream, never give up!
2007-11-06 10:51:42 · answer #3 · answered by mommy00420 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋