waking up at 6 a.m.
is always such a drag,
you rub those heavy eyes of yours,
"it's another day...", you say.
another day awoken,
by the dreadful buzzing sound,
it's sound so annoying,
it just drives you insane.
you prepare all your stuffs,
before you go to school,
rushing so you wouldn't be late,
and wouldn't get detention.
your endless complains are heard,
all throughout the day,
"why this?!", "why that?!",
"I can't take it anymore!".
just when you were about to break,
you crashed into them,
a smile appeared on your face,
for you questions have been answered.
"now I know..." you happily say,
as you helped them up,
you survived all these years,
because you have your friends.
every problem you meet,
your friends are always there,
now you finally learn that,
at the end of the day...
...all you've done,
all you've been through...
...it's all worth it.
2007-11-05 22:28:05 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
koala lumber,
nope it's not a riddle, and it's not a tadpole :D
2007-11-12 18:19:53 · update #1
crow,
ouch. hehe uhm could you tell me what made it terrible so at least i can improve it. please and thank you. :D
2007-11-12 18:22:02 · update #2
oh good, now thats what i call is a dark poetry written so much in light and hope, simple but effective, marks the characteristic theme of the poetry, those verses sounds not only familiar but are quite universal, applying to each one of us who is living on this planet, Good work, Cheers, Kudoz
2007-11-06 00:49:22 · answer #1 · answered by I M Stoned 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Terrible.
2007-11-12 20:29:02 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well written and it has a story line which makes it interesting. You have a true talent...keep writing....
2007-11-06 08:10:12 · answer #3 · answered by QuestionQueen 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What do I think?
I think you have done an excellent job.
I don't know what to add to that statement, so I'll hush now.
2007-11-06 12:53:27 · answer #4 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Brava, I really loved this, reminds me of my daughter *^_^*
very unique style
2007-11-06 06:38:38 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the answer is tadpoles..is this a riddle?
2007-11-06 06:30:13 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ha - you teens and your poetry...
2007-11-06 06:32:14 · answer #7 · answered by ShoCh 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it. It's so true.
2007-11-06 06:30:10 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋