What do you think of my song...?

Question

Try to make it a different way,
Learn from the past and your mistakes
Don't run away when life gets bad
It's a risk worth takin'
a pain worth achin'
your fate is in your hands
an empty room can be so loud
too many tears can drown you out
believe in yourself and then you'll find...
great things happen in the blink of an eye
your first step,
your last breath
everything's been planned
there's questions and answers you'll never understand
we have a long way
bute we get closer every day
in the end,
this long, hard road is just another bend
an empty room can be so loud
too many tears can drown you out
on the outside shinin away
on the inside dyin to say
it all falls into place
everyone needs somethin to believe in
there's more to life than just to live
it's like a light in the dark
just bein who you are
don't stop wonderin,
take a stand
a single smile
is a helping hand
great things happen in the link of an eye
and the tons of mistakes will fade over time

(I didn't have enough room-so here's the rest)

nothing's worth losin;
especially the chance to make it right
learn from the past and your mistakes
it all falls into place

C-I have no clue how to write music to my song...so if anyone here will write music for me that would be great!!

Answer 1

that is very nice! i love it! you should start doiing albums

Answer 2

Interesting! Not bad. Flows at the beginning,you may have something there! I write also.

Answer 3

Wow! You wrote that? Impressive.

Answer 4

Good lyrics! Too bad we can't hear the melody...

Answer 5

I think it's good. =)

Answer 6

its good