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So, would you be so kind as to convey the message from the ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew, Sir?
2007-11-04 17:04:06 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I would very much appreciate it, if you would convey the message from the ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew. Thank you.
2007-11-04 17:08:20 · answer #1 · answered by Honeypai 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kindly convey this message from ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew. I hope you don't mind. Thank you.
2007-11-04 17:08:08 · answer #2 · answered by Mutya P 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Can you make it shorter is the question. You are saying something that could be explained with much more brevity using as many words as you possibly can. It verges on talking down to the person you are addressing and you are wasting there potentially valuable time by being so wordy, kind of like what I am doing now with you. I would say " Sir, would you please give this message from ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrews?" and then thank them regardless of their response.
2007-11-04 17:13:57 · answer #3 · answered by hiwokakeru 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Tone it down, don't sound over-nice, sounds condensending: Would you be kind enough to convey the message from the ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew?
2007-11-04 17:08:16 · answer #4 · answered by martin l 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sir, if you could be so kind as to convey the message from the ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew, it would be greatly appreciated.
2007-11-04 17:13:34 · answer #5 · answered by Miss Understood 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Would You please be so kind as to convey the message from ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew? Many thanks in advance for all Your help, it is much appreciated.
This is if you want to be really, really polite :-)
2007-11-04 17:08:46 · answer #6 · answered by Sabi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sir,
Please convey the message from the ATD Tours & Travel to Mr.Andrew. Thank you. This is the way I would make this sentence it is a business way.
2007-11-04 17:20:22 · answer #7 · answered by Vannili 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Would you please be so kind as to convey the message from the ATD Tours & Travel to Mr. Andrew? Thank you."
2007-11-04 17:07:57 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
sir,can u pls convey the message from the ATD tours &travel to mr.andrew
2007-11-04 17:09:29 · answer #9 · answered by sssshhhh...... 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Remember 90% of communication is non-verbal. So while there isn't any way to make that sentance more polite, if it is used in a different context or said with a certain tone of voice in might be incredibly rude. Although honestly I can't see how someone could say you are being impolite by saying that. Maybe snooty , arrogant or sarcastic depending on the situation but defiantly not rude.
2007-11-04 17:13:35 · answer #10 · answered by steven j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋