what do u think??

Question

have a good superhero in my story for the first book. You get to know him, and you start liking him and connecting.

The second book: he slowly transforms from a good guy to a bad guy.

Third:he's kept at a prison like place for almost 2 decades. show's his once love interest (broke up cuz of his bad side) is married and has his son. In the end, there's a huge war between good and evil. Son= good
father= evil

He is so strong, that he ends up destroying the whole city or more (haven't decided). His love dies, his son dies, and a lot more people but he survives. and i dont' know how else to end it but what do u think??

Answer 1

i like it. but you should let someone not connected to "hero" survive, like a little boy or something. You could have him looking around at all the destruction, then you could start a new series with this little boy or mid-teenager(havent decided) and have him tell the tale from his point like a day before the destruction and from then on.......

i like your story so far, its something my brother would read...

-chai ♥

Answer 2

I like it! What color is his cape?