Denmark is near the Temperate zone, at the meeting point of diverse climate conditions from the Atlantic, to the arctic. On the other hand, Brazil's is near the Tropical zone which makes the climate of Brazil change frequently. The two are different because they are both bordering water, they believe in Christianity, they both worship the most popular sport (soccer), and they love wearing European fashions.
2007-11-04 08:46:52 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Hey, Not bad but I would denfinatly give a few suggestions. I would not exactly put comma's after comma's mainly because it does not create a type of flow in the paragraph nor in the statement your trying to provide. So I be more than happy to rephrase:
Denmark is known to lie near an area which is known as the temperate zone. As it lies here it is said to be at the melting point for a diverse amount of climate conditions . These conditons can range from the atlantic ocean all the way through the artic ocean. While on the other hand brazil is found to be near what is known as the tropic zone, this type of zone makes brazils climate change freqeuntly. The two zones represent very different qualities. They both are bordering water, and are both known to have a belief for christianity. So either zone you go to you will always find a the religion of christianity. The zones also have soccor as their favorite sport and have a love in wearing the european fashions.
2007-11-04 09:40:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Denmark is near the Temperate Zone--at the meeting point of diverse climate conditions from the Atlantic Ocean to the Arctic Ocean. Brazil is near the Tropical Zone which makes the climate of Brazil change frequently. The two are similar because they are both bordered by water; the populations are largely Christian; both countries have great fans of the world's most popular sport (soccer), and the people of both countries can often be seen wearing European fashions.
I'm not sure what you're going for here, but if it's a contrast you aren't achieving it. Comparison? Yes, but not a contrast.
2007-11-04 08:58:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Denmark is near the Temperate Zone, at the meeting point of diverse climate conditions from the Atlantic to the Arctic. Brazil is near the Tropical Zone which makes the climate of Brazil change frequently. The two are similar because they both border water, they both believe in Christianity, they both worship the most popular sport in the world, soccer, and they love wearing European fashions.
2007-11-04 08:52:08 · answer #3 · answered by slice_n_hook@yahoo.com 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are many grammatical errors in this paper. You need and opening sentence that explains why you are comparing the two countries. Watch the use of commas, they are overused in this paragraph. Also, don't say "Brazil's is" if you write that out is says,"Brazil is is". Please take this paper to someone that can sit down with you to explain why it is faulty. This will help you with future assignments. Good luck!
2007-11-04 09:01:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Capitalize Arctic since it's a region.
Take the 's off of Brazil's
Last sentence: the two are similar, not different.
2007-11-04 08:50:43 · answer #5 · answered by Judy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋