I climbed up the door and opened the stairs,
Said my pajamas and put on my prayers,
Then I turned off the bed and crawled into the light,
All becuz you kissed me goodnight!
Next morning I woke up and scrambled my shoes,
Picked up my eggs and toasted the news,
I couldn't tell my left from right,
All becuz you kissed me goodnight!
That evening at last I felt normal again,
So I picked up my mother and called the phone,
I spoke to the puppy and threw Dad a bone,
Even at midnight the sun was still bright,
All becuz you kissed me goodnight!
Do you think this is any good?
Thanks!! ^_^
2007-11-04 07:50:58 · 32 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
WOW!! I love it I think its wonderful. I think good is kind of short to describe it. The lyrics are so awsome. I really really to hear in the radio someday.
4Real you are so talented!!
2007-11-04 09:00:58 · answer #1 · answered by chiquiz08 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Threw dad a bone? lol
This is good.
You have talent, I can tell.
Do you write a lot of poems?
I would like to read more of what you've written.
Mike J
You're in my contacts, I don't know if I'm one of yours.
2007-11-04 17:42:36 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's alright actually. Better than some of the deluded stuff that people are brave enough to type on here.
2007-11-04 08:01:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice piece.!
-Published Poet
2007-11-04 08:00:33 · answer #4 · answered by mahoganychik@yahoo.com 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
young, swimmer, poet, lover, and British (Scottish)..... you are a man that is in extinction!
Today , the British men are really stupids. You are an exception!
it's really OK!
Kisses from Wales, UK.
2007-11-04 08:35:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is brilliant, sounds like a person truly in love.
2007-11-04 07:54:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd say you didn't press spellchecker before you submitted. Now that tends to kinda negate your question some; is what I would say.
2007-11-04 07:55:21 · answer #7 · answered by Blokheed 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes I do. Made me smile and read it through to the very end.
I found it oddly touching.
2007-11-04 07:55:44 · answer #8 · answered by ? 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like something spike milligan would have wrote.
2007-11-04 07:55:17 · answer #9 · answered by taxed till i die,and then some. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yeah that was really good but i liked that saying did you make that up or did you find that on the internet
2007-11-04 07:56:01 · answer #10 · answered by Joshua 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋