i like scones
they are delicious
i keep them in the cupboard
beside the dishes
2007-11-04 07:45:02 · 24 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I actually really liked it
It is a lot better than some of the other crap you see on here
8.5 out of 10
2007-11-06 11:39:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-11-04 15:54:10 · answer #2 · answered by Amy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bravo bravo brilliant brilliant and the judges score are
craig 4 disgraceful attemp at a poem embarrased the poem nation
arlene 7 that was a very good attempt if you were a scone i would eat it
len 9 in all my time i have never come acroos such a bad attempt of a poem but this poem actually works it rhymes and people will like it
bruno 8 fantastico fantastico an eleglantly written poem it has the sweetness n lovelyness in and people do love scones and this poem must have come from your heart that was out of this world
2007-11-04 16:01:52 · answer #3 · answered by Leo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
-10
2007-11-04 15:50:45 · answer #4 · answered by Big Daddy.D 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Good one. 10/10. Sounds like a Spike Milligan poem!
2007-11-04 15:47:35 · answer #5 · answered by Rolsy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't you wish that you could write
Proper poems, not this shite?
Though your spelling is first rate,
Your age you really ought to state.
If we knew the answer then
We could mark you out of ten.
No offence, but if you are still at school, it's not too bad. Other than that, sorry you won't make it as poet laureate.
2007-11-04 15:57:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I found the scones you left near the dishes
After eating them all I send you good wishes x 10
2007-11-05 04:25:06 · answer #7 · answered by AnnieG 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, it rhymes, which makes it a better poem than 'This Is Just To Say' by William Carlos Williams. Have a ten!
2007-11-04 15:59:33 · answer #8 · answered by Druidus 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1 out of 10, but if you expanded it into about 10 verses you might get a higher rating...then again, you might lose the 1 I gave you.
2007-11-05 06:14:54 · answer #9 · answered by thom t 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Lol,
As flowers are supposedly beauty
One that doesn't belong leaves no shine
Unable to be noticed
Have you got something for me to dine?
Basic meaning: Your poem is like elementary school level and I wouldn't even bother to read it.
2007-11-04 19:11:52 · answer #10 · answered by UnknownD 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋