liar
Built upon your house of cards,
My heart in pieces, razor sharp shards.
Lies are what you do best,
Rodents, insects, you my pest.
You play with my feelings dear,
Checking out others with a leer.
Someday soon your time will come,
I'll make sure your days are done.
Deep within the depths of hell,
Brimstone, fire, a tolling bell.
All the times you fooled me girl,
Your heart's as tiny as a pearl.
Even though you think you've won,
I know you;ll never see the sun.
Fire cleanses I've been told.
Corpses, bones and bitter cold.
As you ponder what went wrong,
Satans minions sing a song.
I'm glad you're gone you evil whore,
As I speak, Hell spews forth more.
2007-11-04 06:12:01 · 7 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Seething words. Angry words. Bitter release.
As I read your words, I had the feeling that it would be best if I were to "stand back a bit", or be injured by them.
Powerfully spoken
2007-11-04 07:33:40 · answer #1 · answered by Midnight Lilly 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-15 00:33:52 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Brilliant poem you put how i feel into words.Thanks
2007-11-04 06:22:57 · answer #3 · answered by conan l 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Whoa - very intense! I'm staying away from your angry side - lol...
2007-11-04 07:43:42 · answer #4 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
angry are we?? lol really good poem. You never fail to impress me.
2007-11-04 06:20:40 · answer #5 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Impressive.
What more can I add.....
2007-11-04 08:57:53 · answer #6 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i loved it
2007-11-04 08:06:55 · answer #7 · answered by Amy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋