I'll constantly wonder what went wrong. I'll forever think of what I could've did that was never done.
Here we are walking
Yet not talking
Such a dreadful silence
We’ve grown apart
Yet here we are
Walking, but not talking
We are together
Yet far apart
I watch our shadows
With a sour look
Slipping farther apart
This cannot be
What happened to you and me?
What happened bcoz of that silly fight
And we stopped talking to each other
I wish our shadows would be close again
Like when you and I were best friends
Please don't leave me here
You don't have to go,
I can't stand to say goodbye
I don’t want you to walk away
I wouldn't want you to see me cry
I don’t know what I am gonna do
But when I see you start leaving
I'll have one thing to say to you
If you leave, please don’t look back.
2007-11-04 02:22:22 · 6 answers · asked by Bipin 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Actually it is really GOOOD...Did u write it urself...? Evn I write poems but you know I'vent written any such poem till yet.......But,I wuld like to suggest that If its not self composed then you must write something on ur own..B'coz I believe that way u will be able to express what you feel in a much better way than any copied stuff.......B'coz what u write urself will come directly from ur heart and the other person will be able to understand ur point and feelings in a easier way..........
Thats just an advice...Follow what you believe will work out well.......!!
GOOD LUCK..!!
2007-11-04 21:05:36 · answer #1 · answered by ♪ вμttεгƒlŷ ♪ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems like a relationship gone sour.
In my opinion, poems don't work as well as a letter with words written from the heart. A poem is nice, but doesn't really express your feelings, because you need to make the next graph rhyme. A letter needs no rhyme, but just the way you feel and care.
2007-11-04 10:29:21 · answer #2 · answered by Yafooey! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that I have chewing gum on the sole of my shoe, it's so sticky, Yugo. It's about as sincere as I was when I told my ex wife that I wouldn't cheat on her again.
2007-11-04 10:30:41 · answer #3 · answered by whyme? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is yahoo answers, not yahoo bad poetry night.
2007-11-04 10:25:16 · answer #4 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no offense but i think its kinda of tacky. just being brutally honest here.
2007-11-04 10:26:34 · answer #5 · answered by narwhale335 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude,,,,, give it up,, she found someone else,,, that is all it ever is!
2007-11-04 10:26:10 · answer #6 · answered by crasher 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋