Cut out unnecessary words or phrases.?

Question

cut out the unnecessary words or phrases from these sentences.

1. The report examined what the ABC project manager considered to be a technically acceptable risk.



2. During the course of its field work, the ABC team will be engaged in the process of reviewing all of the notes that have been accumulated in previous studies.

3. She believed that the recruiting of more minorities for the technical staff is essential.

4 . The department must determine its aims and goals so that they can be included in the annual strategic plan produced by ABC for the year of 2004.

Answer 1

1. The report examined what the ABC project manager considered an acceptable risk.

2. During its work, the ABC team will review the notes of the previous studies.

3. She believed recruiting of more minorities for the technical staff is essential.

4 . The department must determine its goals so that they can be included in the annual strategic plan produced by ABC for 2004.

Answer 2

1. Remove the word: technically
2. Reduce to: During the course of its field work, the team will be engaged in the process of reviewing all of the notes from previous studies.
3. Perhaps remove: for the technical staff
4. Reduce to: The department must determine its aims and goals so that they can be included in the annual strategic plan of 2004.