For You…
I was lonely
Lost out in this crowd
Wandering and searching
For a friend’s light
I saw the night sky clearing
When you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
What joy you would bring
From that moment on
A friendship did start
You kissed away my tears
And sheltered my heart
I bless the day God
Sent you from above
But then I grew fearful
For I had fallen in love
I told you this feeling
And what did you say?
You said you liked our friendship
And that's how it would stay
I cried for a friendship I thought I lost almost
Plz tell me it’s not true…
I still have that friend along with me.
With you my heart will always stay. With you my thoughts will be every day. You remain to be the one that I regret letting get away. Why did I say what I need not say? You are the one I will always use my wishes on. You are the one I will always wish was never gone. I'll constantly wonder what went wrong. >>>>
2007-11-04 02:01:53 · 8 answers · asked by Bipin 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
That's very nice I can relate to your poem, it happened to me. Except my best friend fell in love with me. I actually got mad at her because after 10 years of friendship and I didn't know she was also attracted to women! N-E ways that was nice
2007-11-04 02:08:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Actually it is really GOOOD...Did u write it urself...? Evn I write poems but you know I'vent written any such poem till yet.......But,I wuld like to suggest that If its not self composed then you must write something on ur own..B'coz I believe that way u will be able to express what you feel in a much better way than any copied stuff.......B'coz what u write urself will come directly from ur heart and the other person will be able to understand ur point and feelings in a easier way..........
Thats just an advice...Follow what you believe will work out well.......!!
GOOD LUCK..!!
2007-11-04 21:06:17 · answer #2 · answered by ♪ вμttεгƒlŷ ♪ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
wow !!!!!! I really really love your writings. If the girl whom you wrote this for will read this ,shell be i dunno.... But im sure that something is so happy soo glad sooo everything positive you can think of.You are a great writter keep it up!!!!:) OOH I ALMOST FORGOT..... IT IS SOOO SENCERE!!!! A SCALE OF 1-10 ,ILL GIVE YOU A TEN!!!
2007-11-04 02:09:54 · answer #3 · answered by Fili.Gen. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really heart-felt and it's good. but you're not asking if it the poem was good was it. But it is.
in essence, yes, it's damn bl**dy sincere enough!!!
send it out!
2007-11-04 02:08:20 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is yahoo answers, not yahoo bad poetry.
2007-11-04 02:04:57 · answer #5 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
good job love it!!! just inprove your grammer and use more big words
2007-11-04 02:05:52 · answer #6 · answered by Alie 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats really good & yes it is
2007-11-04 02:15:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is awesome.. gives me chills =D
2007-11-04 02:05:15 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋