Eden's End
Oh my my, look at you there
So sweet, so innocent...so delicious
Oh lord, I can't take my eyes off of you
You're vibrant, intoxicating, and oh so taken
Oh no, I can't help myself around you
I'm somebody else when I'm with you
Somebody I like, somebody that likes you
You're everything I want, I need, and then some
We could be good together, but we're not together
Sweet Jesus, I know I'm in trouble
You've already gotten under my skin
You're stuck in my head and i can't get you out of there
The worst thing is that I don't honestly want to get you out
We can't help who we fall for, but that's no excuse
Here I am, stuck between right and wrong
Struggling with the choice before me
The right thing might send me to Heaven miserable
The wrong thing may send me to Hell happy
But is this forbidden fruit worth the price I'd have to pay
2007-11-03 23:47:55 · 7 answers · asked by tepes1994 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
somewhere between a womans romance novel and the opening lines in a penthouse forum story
2007-11-03 23:51:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good,this poem really Ryhmes!!!
2007-11-04 08:44:52 · answer #2 · answered by ♫Kristy♫ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As "You give me a Woodie" poems go, this one is not bad. Your sense of humor saves it.
TD
2007-11-04 07:01:34 · answer #3 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good...but more of a song than a poem.
2007-11-04 06:55:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
2007-11-04 07:13:32 · answer #5 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its kinda too corny..lol
2007-11-04 06:51:24 · answer #6 · answered by lena 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is ok
2007-11-04 06:50:34 · answer #7 · answered by cheri h 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋