I Didn’t Know
You said you’d love me forever
You said you couldn’t live without me
You said I was beautiful
You said I was your only
I said I didn’t believe you
I said you were lying
I said you never loved me
I said that and you started crying
I said I didn’t love you
Oh, why couldn’t I shut up?
I said all those things to you
Why couldn’t I lighten up?
I didn’t know you were true
I didn’t know you wanted me to be your wife
I didn’t know this when I screamed “LIAR!”
I didn’t know this until the night you ended your life
Now I’ll never be your wife
Now I’ll never see
But, now I know
That in heaven, we will always be
I didn’t have the guts to say
That when I pushed you away
I wanted you to come closer to me
Goodbye, my love
Goodbye, me sweet
Goodbye, my lover
Don’t be sad, for now I see
Just know that I will always love you
2007-11-03 05:29:25 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
If you actually wrote that then its awsome.
= ) good job if so!
2007-11-03 05:32:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Books are the most excellent of issues. Yours sounds like a treasure. I accept as true with the different solutions that it is impressive for a 13 365 days previous. that's a fine looking yet unhappy poem. you will see that the tricks of Blake's later poetry brimming contained in the words.
2016-10-23 08:05:36 · answer #2 · answered by hodnett 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok so like five minutes ago you were 14 and wrote the same poem. Now I dont even think you wrote it
2007-11-03 05:36:05 · answer #3 · answered by girls k 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Excellent job.
2007-11-03 05:34:18 · answer #4 · answered by Cat Stevens 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow...it's good....but i don't understand how you are 13 now...because in that question you asked about your story you were 14 ...
I'm geussing you really are 14 because your name classygirl93
im geussing you were born in '93 making you 14
2007-11-03 05:43:35 · answer #5 · answered by EA ~ Victorian asylum 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was amazing
I couldn't write something half that good when i was 13
2007-11-03 05:39:41 · answer #6 · answered by Hornet One 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Considering you're 13, it makes me feel really uncomfortable.
2007-11-03 06:45:05 · answer #7 · answered by Victoria. 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is all right. But at thirteen, I doubt you know very much about love.
2007-11-03 05:34:17 · answer #8 · answered by Puddlemere United Fan 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
kinda depressing
it sounds more like a song
2007-11-03 05:50:33 · answer #9 · answered by The Berginator 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i answered when you posted this the first time...i thought you were 14?
2007-11-03 05:37:06 · answer #10 · answered by Hollister Chica 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
Edit: Yikes, Anon is right.
2007-11-03 05:34:11 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋