“Anger”
By Ashley Kalar
So angry, I’m shaking
Wanna punch someone in the face
Lies, accusations, harassment
Can’t take it anymore
School is a form of torture to me
‘Cause I’m always blamed
For things I didn’t do
Just wish to get away
What to do now?
I’m gonna get suspended soon
For all the wrong things
Help, don’t know what to do
Anger has become
My best friend now
It’s so common
I’ll live with it forever
2007-11-03 03:47:41 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I thought it was totally beautiful. You used so much passion and details on what's going on. I just loved it.
2007-11-03 03:53:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a good piece. Now that you have written it, do you see what is wrong with your life right now? Your out of control You need to have a session with the school physiologist. Most school systems have one, and your counselor at school could set it up and no one would know about it. I was in the same place you are now. I tested with a high IQ and was expected to be something I did no want to be. I was angry all the time. I had my own chair in the assistant principals office. I was given an appointment with the school physiologist. I was able to get all the crap out and I found that it wasn't all me doing this. The teachers were told to back off and let me get the grades without any BS from them. That was at turning point for me. I was in real conflict with people expecting so much of me and doing it in front of a whole classroom of kids. Any body reading this with these same or different problems, there is help. Reach out for it. It just might end the pain your going through now.
2007-11-03 11:10:51 · answer #2 · answered by redd headd 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
the key to poetry is to find an audience...
If they can relate to the words, than its a good poem...
I personally don't think its very good because it seems to contain syllabals that are too long and the beat seems to be missing...
However, I'm not in high school so I have no frame of refrence right now for getting suspended.... Sorry......
2007-11-03 10:56:21 · answer #3 · answered by tammy p 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very nice. You are a good poet. But going in wrong direction. Instead of showing anger in your poems try to serve the world with sweet words which can inspire others so in return you feel happy which is better than angry.
2007-11-03 10:53:08 · answer #4 · answered by Answer_Me 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I am not sure. My guess is Kinda. Just start being nice and helpful. If you angry write poem about good things and happy thoughts not anger or so and so did this. Just relax your self and count to 10 and release all of the anger in your body that is bottled up.
2007-11-03 10:52:55 · answer #5 · answered by Jamie 1000 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
What do u think... That's the question.... Do you know what poetry is? Poetry is something that you right and feel, that can ease all your troubles away... If that's what you feel when you write this poem, than it must be good. Well to me, it's a wonderful poem. It gives deep thoughts and expresses something!
2007-11-03 10:52:37 · answer #6 · answered by sugaglo_1994 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
its very good though sorry to hear about all the trouble. but actually there is no good or bad poem. poetry is letting out ur feelings. though I'll mention again, in the ways of poetry opinions its very nice. sorry again
2007-11-03 10:53:55 · answer #7 · answered by Artsy 1 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats really good but you shouldn't be so angry. yeah school sucks but there is probably AT LEAST 1 thing in ur life that makes you feel good
2007-11-03 10:51:22 · answer #8 · answered by xblriley360 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Very good....if you have a problem write it down and dont get in any trouble at school.
2007-11-03 10:51:46 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i think that some of the words and lines could be changed to make it more appealing to the reader. the words that are used are gtood, but not very professional.
2007-11-03 10:50:36 · answer #10 · answered by LISA C 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋