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Unsinkable
I thought I was onboard a proper boat
Captained by someone most competently
We sailed into the night, where icebergs float
Assured of friendly seas, a gentle breeze
What the hell has happened!
My feet are getting wet!
Captain! Oh Captain!
There may be a problem here!
Don’t jump the ship you scurvy little rats
Women and children first, we must agree
The rescuers will surely see our flares
I thought I was onboard a proper boat
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2007-11-03 01:56:20 · 4 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It's just as meaningful and humanly as the movie Titanic! ;-)
2007-11-03 02:46:20 · answer #1 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My sister used to play the dorsimbra...
Your poems are very good. You should write some more.
2007-11-03 09:05:01 · answer #2 · answered by Ha'ole Boy! 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Reminds me of the Titanic, good poem, TD.
2007-11-03 09:14:19 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Do you write stories as well? Each of your poems is like a little story.
2007-11-03 13:54:13 · answer #4 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋