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Silly me

Here I am, look at me
I’m a monkey in a tree
I’m the joker and the fool in love with you

So please, follow me
On a sailing ship-journey
Venice, to Perth, on seven seas

So if you, believe in me
Then, hand in hand we’ll be
Safe and sound, in perfect harmony

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2007-11-03 01:30:20 · 9 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

9 answers

I like reading your poems because you are serious about them but don't take yourself seriously, silly you!

2007-11-03 06:52:10 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1 0

Good rhyming indeed. An optimistic and hopeful view.
But, again you are right, as we are both in the same ship, "silly me", too much hopefully _ _ _ ???!

2007-11-03 09:10:15 · answer #2 · answered by :)(: 5 · 1 0

not bad, but how bout: I,m so sad that we finally parted, but I know it,s cause I farted, and filled my under britches up with crap. It put us in a quandry, cause I refused to do the laundry. Pardon me, but I got a defective flap.

2007-11-03 08:58:06 · answer #3 · answered by bobsee8 4 · 1 0

Nice one, TD. Why not a title like...

Silly me in love
or
Silly love

2007-11-03 09:06:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

Awesome rhyming...
Great sounding...
Pleasant hearing...
Pleasure reading...
All embedded in your writing!
;-)

2007-11-03 09:11:36 · answer #5 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 1 0

Awesome poem ^_^

2007-11-03 08:33:22 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

This is cute. Bob's is good too.

2007-11-03 09:03:26 · answer #7 · answered by Ha'ole Boy! 2 · 2 0

I like it!! It's sweet and cheerful!!!

2007-11-03 14:05:28 · answer #8 · answered by I Heart Holidays... 6 · 1 0

wht a sweet poetry....

2007-11-03 08:45:48 · answer #9 · answered by enigma 3 · 1 0

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