"The purpose of this guide is to help you to keep up with all of these exciting changes and to successfully respond to the demands put on you by your clients. " If not, how could it be corrected?
2007-11-02 07:55:36 · 4 answers · asked by dullerd 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
The sentence is ok, but it is very wordy. I would simplify it.
"The purpose of this guide is to help you keep up with exciting changes and successfully respond to your client's demands"
Since I don't have the context of the sentence, that's the best I can do! I would put something after changes to indicate changes is WHAT. eg. "...changes in this industry..."
Hope this helps!
2007-11-02 08:02:45 · answer #1 · answered by TC 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The purpose of this guide is to help you keep up with all of these exciting changes and successfully respond to client demands."
2007-11-02 15:00:37 · answer #2 · answered by liltiny007 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would rewrite it:
This guide has two purposes. One is to help you keep up with all of these exciting changes, and the other is to aid you in responding successfully to the demands placed on you by your clients.
2007-11-02 15:01:33 · answer #3 · answered by Colette 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
almost:
"The purpose of this guide is to help you keep with all of the exciting changes and to successfully respond to the demands put upon you by your clients."
2007-11-02 15:05:08 · answer #4 · answered by Reni Valentine 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋