Going against the master,
struggling to go faster and faster.
Pinned, forked, skewered, and I'm still fine.
I didn't see the mate in Nine...
2007-11-01 21:54:51 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
haha you are all funny. forks pins and skewers are the basic Chess tactics.
2007-11-02 08:43:25 · update #1
I looked at her,
She looked at me.
I didn't care,
Twas mate in three.
dd
2007-11-05 12:31:43 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is interesting and has potential. I am not sure of what you intend to convey. But it is still intriguing.
Sit down and think of what your final point to convey in the poem and work backwards from there, and see if you can make some simple re-writes. you may come out with a better product! Sometimes that helps when it's difficult for the reader to "get" your point.
2007-11-01 23:27:58 · answer #2 · answered by Heather J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HAHAHAHA wow this poem has only made my total day ! i do no longer think of I actual have ever examine some thing that became so humorous in my finished existence. i'm crying from giggling so no longer basic ! hahaha solid interest :))
2016-09-28 04:32:59 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This sounds like your sex life. Maybe dating? Well, more
to the point. I liked it. I think, that you like writing poetry. If I, am right, do continue. Stay Gold.
2007-11-01 22:11:17 · answer #4 · answered by Bob Dylan ♪ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, I guess I would need a backstory for this one...
That summation will all be alleviated when you are famous, of course...
2007-11-01 22:21:32 · answer #5 · answered by justin r 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was ok, doesnt really make much sense to me tho
2007-11-01 22:02:51 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi,
May I suggest you turn it into a song.
Rgds...............
2007-11-01 22:06:13 · answer #7 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
is this poem was about your life or your sexual life ?
2007-11-01 21:58:13 · answer #8 · answered by pink lily 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋