With reading this poem do you understand who or what i am talkin about. also please give opinions good or bad?
Im In Love
It took me a while to understand
This Man
This being
By finally seeing this light He had
I tried to avoid it
Force myself not to fall
But my mind was to weak
His face i didnt have to see
for His words were breath taking
Up lifting
So powerful was His mind
That each time He spoke
My body felt fre e from all that was bothering me
Holdin me back from the path im suppose to take
I gave my soul to Him
and how good did it feel
To finally be loved
to be held
He broke all barriers to my heart
torn apart all pain
Wiped away each tear that appeared on my face
This gace
This love
For I have never felt
Love was a known uknown
But now truly I am in love
2007-11-01 20:09:11 · 6 answers · asked by ccret 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Forgive me if I may be wrong, as I read your poem, you seem to be thinking about our Lord Jesus Christ.
What caught my attention was the words "His face I didn't have to see"... which Jesus told Thomas, "You believe because you have seen me. Blessed are those who haven't seen me and yet still believe."
Your poem is very well done to let others know... that if you put your trust in Christ Jesus, you will understand what it means to have PEACE and HUMILITY in your life.
Thanks for the uplifting
2007-11-01 20:44:27 · answer #1 · answered by run_stand_1 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd have to say it was refering to Jesus as well. However, if you want to clean up the poem, you need to start by doing a spell check:
I'm (not Im)
didn't (not didnt)
uplifting (not up lifting)
breathtaking (not breath taking)
free (not fre e)
holding (not holdin)
tore (not torn)
supposed (not suppose)
grace (not gace)
the poem was a little erratic, but your passion came out just fine. keep writing
2007-11-02 03:50:21 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
didn't like it.
I love you.
I am who I am because of you.
You are every reason, every hope, and every dream
I've ever had,
and no matter what happens to us in the future,
every day we are together is the greatest day of my life.
I will always be yours.
-from The Notebook
2007-11-02 03:19:38 · answer #3 · answered by schtick.trogs 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it was ok.
it was beautifully written and very moving but ther is something missing
something special
i didnt feel any rythmn or beat
but good work..
2007-11-02 03:49:21 · answer #4 · answered by MegaStar 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good.love makes life in everyning.
2007-11-02 03:16:39 · answer #5 · answered by sree m 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It is very good.
2007-11-02 03:17:35 · answer #6 · answered by Chaz 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋