A poem dedicated to my friend, it's not about love..?

Question

It's your shoulder that I cry on.
Your forehead that I kiss.
Your jokes that keep me laughing.
Your company I miss.
It's your house that I flee to
It's you who can't go wrong
It's you that I won't lie to
It's with you that I belong.
Its you that keeps my secrets
It's you who holds my hand
It's you that I will defend
It's you I understand.
It's you that stops me fallng
It's you, my safety rope
It's you, my only hero
It's you, my only hope
It's you who keeps me pushing on
It's you who shares my strife
It's you that says I'll be okay
It's you who saved my life.

Sorry, looking for opinions... and no it's not a question just looking for advice on what my poetry is like.

Thereare suposed to be too many "its" it the poem as it goes with the repetitive saying "its you" which is the name of the poem.

Answer 1

Its fantastic I love it.
Its you that has true talent
Its you your friend holds dear
Its you who put your poem up
its you that had no fear.
You rock!

Answer 2

I think it's really good. Thank you for sharing this and I look forward to seeing some of your other attempts. Well done!

Answer 3

I think it is good, I shouldn't worry about the repetition of it's you. It shows how much this person means to you and how much you rely on them.

Answer 4

i think this is a great poem, and you're lucky to have a friend like that to dedicate it to. i don't think i have any one single friend like that. different people know different things, and help me in different places.
it is a tad repetetive, but i htink in the most part that adds emphasis. i like it.
write on!

Answer 5

To many 'its'


But so sweeeeeeet

Answer 6

there are too many 'its you' in there.. but it is a good poem

Answer 7

awwwwwwwwwwww

Answer 8

is that a question????