A brush of your lips
sends tingles down my spine
the feeling is so light and soft
and won't go away.
The soft kiss on the back of my neck
is like a feather brushing there.
Your whisper in my ear
is so soft and sweet,
it makes me collapse against your chest
and feel your heart beat.
The beating of your heart
matches mine beat for beat.
You put your arms around me
and I melt like soft butter in the sun.
Our bodies become one
as you hold my face
and look into my eyes.
I see into your soul,
it is a magical moment
that will always stay
in my heart forever.
Your lips force mine apart
and you come inside
and I feel your warmth.
I feel your essence, your spirit
and your love.
Your arms become stronger
and I cannot resist
so I return the magical kiss.
Now our souls are intertwined
and we make love
to seal the magic we have found.
1/30/2003
2007-11-01 07:32:45 · 4 answers · asked by Magical 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
♥wow♥ I totally like it. Gave me chills. Thanks for sharing it!!
2007-11-01 07:44:07 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Unaccustomed as I am to giving praise to non-rhyming poetry, that was quite good. You have an excellent word flow here that binds the wording together without rhyming. Well done, well done, indeed.
2007-11-01 21:20:28 · answer #2 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely.
2007-11-01 16:04:05 · answer #3 · answered by Linni 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very pretty!
2007-11-01 14:44:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋