I am a prisoner to my own heart and soul
bounded by chains of my feelings for you
every time I see you my chains grow longer
its no use trying to break free I'm powerless
i try to reach for you but i fall further
with every blessing there's always a curse
i guess my curse was just loving you
it was your eyes that captured my soul
your glare was one that i couldn't resist
and your looks that captured my heart
now skips a beat at the sight of you
those words that you whispered to me
still make me fall onto my knees
adds weight to these bounding chains
you led me to believe you loved me
Heres another I had written her ....she never read it...but it exists...
Of days gone by...
I remember those full of confusion...among every confliction.
Have I lived?
You are the grace that has lifted me,
and brought me crashing to my knees.
You invoke possibilities...and wonder.
You breathe life through me...
You strive to reach farther from yourself,
Searching for an opening...
You bring me happiness, and sorrow...
You are the infection of passion,
as well as the cure...
You surprise me on every level...
You make me wake up to something better,
realizing my own dreams and desires.
You hide when I seek, and seek when I am hidden.
You are the strongest essense when I close my eyes,
only seeing you...
Your vision is burned into me,
scarring my soul.
This feeling....missing you.
A new vision encompasses,
a better day ahead.
Brighter and more beautiful,
the beginning comes to mind.
This feeling...loving you!
Have I lived?
I am living now, more than I could ever live,
because of you.
Whatever tomorrow holds,
I will stand beside you...
2007-11-01 05:23:53 · 4 answers · asked by Ripsi W 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Purple Dragon you have no idea just how much tho...she ripped my heart out today.....I miss her...alot...
2007-11-01 06:38:06 · update #1
they are cool and you know you are far worth more than the person you are writing it to she does not see it and therefore just move on i know its hard but you can do it. there are so mnay out there that you may like if you try i know right now you dont' feel like it but you will when things calm down take care.
2007-11-01 14:24:53 · answer #1 · answered by Tsunami 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful.. the person the poems are written about must be amazing, and whoever she is, she's lucky to be loved by you!
2007-11-01 11:10:00 · answer #2 · answered by freckles579 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ur poem is beautiful. it sounds like u love this person alot.
keep up the good work
2007-11-01 05:58:25 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
im a poet too!
but all i can say is wow,
good job, keep it up ;]
2007-11-01 05:35:14 · answer #4 · answered by мαяιтzα αяℓεηε 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋