I love the way you put those words together.
I'm sorry but I can't seem to do the same.
For me it's hard to predict, just like the weather.
My poems turn out kind of korny and lame.
I may not even spell any of the words right,
But I try my best, Thank you and goodnight!! :o)
2007-10-31 19:28:21 · 24 answers · asked by #1 Girl -She's Bittersweet- 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
~LOL Just another fun dude!
No you can not,
But you can buy me a drink,
I don't need a lot,
Or else I may need the sink...
2007-10-31 19:31:41 · update #1
EDIT:
For those GREAT replies
Thank your for your wonderful rhyme
I've been a bit slow and out of time.
I gave you as thumbs-up as I could,
But I only have ONE and that's no good... :o(
2007-10-31 19:52:30 · update #2
Roses are red
Pickles are green
I like your legs
but can i be inbetween?...;)
Edit- LOL. I was just joking. A drink is much better!!! Nice poem!
2007-10-31 19:30:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋
Well well well
Oh ma Belle
Far away perhaps in Babel
Are you an Angel
Rides my Camel
For a long Travel
To never cancel
My passion's Channel
I find a citadel
It looks Cruel
But things are duel
For my passion is fuel
In my heart like a gel
With words like Gospel
In my soul as label
Which make in high level
My passion for ma Belle
For she's my model
Pixel by pixel
I seek the mutuel
To feel in parallel
With my Spirituel
In my next poem vowel
I hope to meet my Supermodel
2007-11-01 00:05:06 · answer #2 · answered by Master B 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
30 plus and empty inside got nothing left to give
knowing its prolly gonna be no better and still half a life to live
I need something great to happen to take me out of this downward fall
bottoms gotta be coming soon cause I think I've lost it all
I got no more game I feel insane I cant stand myself anymore
looking in the mirror I see a lost person starring back in misery
oh god what has happened to me.
I've lost poeple places things and friends in my rise and fall to here
and all thats left is a piece of the man I used to be I fear.
I know about starting over I tried it one time before
I just dont have the the drive to pick myself up off the floor
I need a push I need a shove I need someone that I can love.
I need a gun I need a bridge is there any reason for me to live.
somthings gotta give.
I can hide my feelings inside or in drugs and drink i know
but its just a matter of time before the madness starts to flow
cant stop this crushing feeling as my head begins to bow
I know I gotta shake it please someone tell my how.
lying here in silence feeling violent having nothing left to lose.
anyone have strength to share or can you tell me why I should care
life just isnt fair
30 plus and empty inside and now some of you should see
your looking inside of this waste of space and what is left of me
2007-10-31 19:43:14 · answer #3 · answered by cre8ur1973 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Saba7 ya Abyad, ya bayad Rabso, enta el abyad eli mesh mesfer Good Morning White, The Whiteness of Rabso, You are the White that is not yellow-ish lol My horrible Translating skills
2016-05-26 06:14:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sure.
Have you ever glanced at a butterfly...
Admired her beauty and how gracefully she flies?
It would be a blessing if she would honor me with her touch
but I can only hope
Her beauty is magnetic there's more than what you see
I hope she doesn't mind when I stop, admire and stare at her
but I just can not turn away..
She gives me hope, and a desire to transcend
to higer levels and to continue morph within...
If she would just land in my hand ---I would surely keep her
But how can a man ever capture such beauty?
To keep her captive and make her his specimen would be a crime
Surely he can't....
lest she die---she must be free to fly
So my dear butterfly, If I can't have you...
Hear my plea! Take my love, for you
have truly touched my heart.
*It's not my best, but I tried
2007-11-01 17:21:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
From a nice guy,
Who would give love a twirl,
I am writing a poem but why?
To possibly know a nice girl?
I do not know you, but you seem kind,
A girl I knew at the prom.
I bet your beauty could blind,
Feel free to write me anytime at fred_george43@yahoo.com
2007-10-31 19:39:58 · answer #6 · answered by fred g 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
To fly as a butterfly in the sun,
In fields as green as on day one,
As free as nature's colorful flowers
In the summertime's happy hours.
2007-10-31 19:37:35 · answer #7 · answered by Carla 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Watching you from afar
I wonder what it would be like
To hold and caress you
To give you my soul
Our eyes meet
This way you come
A smile on your face
A blush on mine
You start to speak
I raise my hand
Words are not needed
To say I like you
2007-10-31 19:39:56 · answer #8 · answered by Wild Bloom 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I traveled across the oceans, moved to other parts, in hopes of finding the women who could steal my heart! So when are you coming? LOL
2007-11-01 00:42:22 · answer #9 · answered by mrjamfy 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd love to meet you dear, someday,
Though you may live so far away.
I want to know your real name,
And love that we can play this game,
I want to get to see your smile,
And have you talk to me awhile.
But even if this fun should end,
Thanks for trying to be my friend.
2007-10-31 19:43:09 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋