How is this resume?

Question

My Name
Box 222
Sometown, PA 52252
[phone]

JOB OBJECTIVE:

Seeking an Office Postition

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICAITONS:

Quick and eager to learn
Enthsiastic, hardworking, and organized
Responsible and reliable; will show up for work as promised
Works well with others
Able to deal pleasently with customers

SKILL:

Proficient in Microsoft Word
Knows basic knowlege of Excel
Designed many flyers and invitations for special events
Created a website using html
Designed detailed graphics using paint shop pro
Knows how to e-mail and use copy machine

Emplyment History:

6/07-9/07 Game Operator Fun Zone Amusements
9/06-9/07 Janitor Serv Pro
7/05-4/06 Cashier KFC/Long John SIlvers

Educaition:

Name of School
222 N. Findley St.
Sometown, PA 52252
Recieved High School diploma

Let me know if it is ok or if in any way I can change it. I just graduated so I dont have alot of exsperience with these things.

Answer 1

Good start. Under "skill," make all the phrases "match." . For instance: proficient in Microsoft Word, basic knowledge of Excel, experience in designing flyers and invitations for special events (using Paint Shop Pro), proficient in office functions (copying, e-mailing), creation of website using HTML.

Instead of "Summary of Qualifications," use the term "Job-Readiness Skills." That is the new buzz word for the soft skills you mentioned.

I would also add "Seeking an entry-level office position."

Good luck! You sound very qualified and I hope you find a position that you like.

Answer 2

For starters, i would use a template in Microsoft Word. They will give you categories to fill in.
For your objective, you want to tell what you are trying to do IN THE JOB, not before getting the job. For example, you could put that your objective is to contribute to office organization and record-keeping (if that's what the job would have you doing). You want your objective to be something you would do while in the position.
Your qualifications aren't really qualifications. You could rename that section to 'positive attributes'.
You would want to rename skill to "abilities' or something along those lines.
You have some typos too.
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