every morning sun rise
golden earth & blue sky
heart for love & mind for peace
that's how my country is
innocent childrens are like dolls
everyday their grandmothers
reads them fairy tales
thats how my country is
traditions, values & manners
are taught to new generation
advices are taken from olders
love is given for no returns
thats how my country is
guests are like god
no matter where they are from
your care is our debt
thats how my country is
festivals are full of dance
enjoyment, diversity & happiness.
every moment of it is precious
thats how my country is
Taj mahal, kutal mahl
ganges & yamuna rivers
chandni chok & belled anklets
are the desires
Every evening sun sets
longing for tomorrow
in the presence of today
thats how my country is
2007-10-31 12:46:15 · 5 answers · asked by Neeto 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Every morning, sun rise,
golden earth & blue sky.
heart for love & mind for peace
that's how my country is.
Innocent children are like dolls
everyday their grandmothers
reads them fairy tales.
thats how my country is.
Traditions, values & manners
are taught to a new generation.
advice is taken from elders.
love is given freely-nothing is expected in return.
thats how my country is.
Guests are like God.
No matter where they are from
your care is our highest concern.
thats how my country is
Festivals are full of dance
enjoyment, diversity & happiness.
every moment of it is precious
thats how my country is.
Taj mahal, kutal mahl
ganges & yamuna rivers
chandni chok & belled anklets
are the desires (i do not understand this so i cannot give you my opinion or edit-sorry)
Every evening sun sets
longing for tomorrow
in the presence of today.
that's how my country is.
(this is beautiful-what is your wonderful country?)
2007-10-31 12:54:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
every morning sun rise
golden earth & blue sky
heart for love & mind for peace
that's how my country is
innocent childrens are like dolls
everyday with their grandmothers
reading them fairy tales
that's how my country is
traditions, values & manners
are taught to every new generation
advices are taken from elders
love is given with no intended return
thats how my country is
guests are heavenly
no matter where they are from
their care is our debt
thats how my country is
festivals are full of dance
enjoyment, diversity & happiness.
every moment of it is precious
that's how my country is
Taj mahal, kutal mahl
ganges & yamuna rivers
chandni chok & belled anklets
are the desires of my country
Every evening the sun sets
longing for tomorrow
in the presence of today
thats how my country is
2007-10-31 19:51:16 · answer #2 · answered by Silvia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a nice poem. A couple extra s's here and ther but over all well done. (after children and read )
2007-10-31 19:50:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice sentiment--always CAPITALIZE first letter of proper names, like God, Kutal, Ganges, Yumana
2007-10-31 19:50:54 · answer #4 · answered by Mike 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is beautiful! please don't change it. and you obviously don't live in america, because people don't really care here. i want to live where you are. it painted a lovely picture in my mind, and that's what poetry is all about. it's amazing :)
2007-10-31 19:51:19 · answer #5 · answered by Shayna K 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋