do i say
My grandfather not only motivated me to be righteous.. or do I say
My grandfather motivated me not only to be a righteous..
or ... not only did my grandfather motivate me to be a righteous...
im not really great at this grammar stuff. its for a college application essay
i think the third sounds better..
2007-10-31 09:49:57 · 5 answers · asked by dazzler 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
correct this sentence too!
There was nothing wrong with going to a school with white people, after all most of them were my friends, but there was always that feeling of being different that didn’t go away.
i think it might be run on sentence can u condense it for me
2007-10-31 09:53:26 · update #1
My grandfather motivated me to be righteous and also.....
2007-10-31 09:54:15 · answer #1 · answered by Max 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
my grandfather, motivated me, not only to be a righteous person, but also to be a _____ & _____ as well.(the two blanks arent compulsory).
I studied in a school where there were white people too, most of whom were my friends, but I always had an uneasiness that i was different, which always seemed to linger in my mind.
2007-10-31 11:02:39 · answer #2 · answered by harley_arn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My grandfather motivated me, not only to be righteous, but __________ and _________, as well.
2007-10-31 10:00:19 · answer #3 · answered by Jessica 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The second is good. I need points lol
2016-10-27 09:02:57 · answer #4 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the second sentence is fine.
2007-10-31 09:59:16 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋