i wrote it but i dont get what it's trying to say i only feel it
how would you ppl label it Gothic,EMO,or a vampire poem
I’m going to accept the truth about us
I’m going to love what I hated
And throw all I’ve loved
This is me after I wasn’t given a choice
I’d rather pick a perfect armor to put out of sight
But this is me and my path is all I can change for now
I will find you no matter what
Do you even breathe?
Am I awake when I perceive you whispering?
I love you, would you please believe if I say you must love me back?
Look at what I’m laying near to you
Let me feel your heartbeat under cold water
Look at what I made of you
We’re possessed NOT poisoned
We’ll nourish each other’s flesh to reside un-thirsty
Read my lips when I say……………………
It’s all I ask for to turn into ashes down the silent hill
I’m burring my roses after I run away from prison
Rescue you from wicked surrounding
I catch you and scan you within my lazer eye
I will vanish my youth for you
Or jump into the burning flames
Holding hands together
But death nevermore
Look at me when I say it’s too late
DON’T remind me
2007-10-31 05:17:54 · 13 answers · asked by judith 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
YOU wrote the poem.....and yet YOU don't understand it?
That's worrisome.....
2007-10-31 05:20:53 · answer #1 · answered by Sydney 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Heck, I've a Masters in Philosophy (to be an even bigger and more effective ****** than I was before) and I haven't the foggiest. Reminds me more of rock lyrics than poetry, in fact, quite a lot like the lyrics to Nirvana songs. Remember that line "I want to eat your cancer" in the song Heart Shaped Box.? What in blazes does that mean? Beats me. I suppose to understand lyrics written under the influence of drugs you have to be under the influence of same. At least it's a hypothesis I set before you, but not substantiated. You weren't speedballing when you wrote this, were you? You are sober now which is probably why you can't understand your own creation! It's happened to me. Back in College I created under the influence of a Hashish-Opium mix a mathematical formula that unified all known phenomena including those of a "spiritual" nature. I had discovered the T.O.E or Theory of Everything in a simple formula which also had an elaborate proof and unusual for a formula had two equals signs and a 0 in the center representing the Primal Void or Chaos. But I confess after sobering up, I could make little or no sense out of my elaborate proof, but at the time, I thought I was communing with the Universal Mind. Oy Vay! Heck, send the lyrics off to a few bands, it might be the next big hit! Not depressing enough or morbid enough for Goth, more like Grunge.
2007-10-31 12:37:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I have notebooks and online blogs full of poems I write. Its almost as if I just hold the pencil(or put my fingers on the keys) and the words just happen.Your subconcious probably knows something you dont. It may take a while to figure out what this really means.Its impossible for someone to get inside your head and come up with the meaning. We may try but we'd all be wrong.
2007-10-31 17:36:30 · answer #3 · answered by Beka14 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Boy, this is: Vampiric Love
this stuff saying nourish each other's flesh
and catch you and scan with a lazer eye that youre both possesed and not POISONED.
2007-10-31 12:23:55 · answer #4 · answered by mod. 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. It sounds like a gothic poem about a person so inlove that is obsessed with this one person and will kill or die for the one they love. It sounds like a dangerous wicked love but does make sense to those who see beyond words.
2007-10-31 12:29:24 · answer #5 · answered by cocoa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds to me like you are soul searching, for who you are,
at the same time you are connecting and mirroring to another person as in co-dependence, wanting that person to view
things as you do, but that person is resisting, and you are torn
to leave with out her, yet you know she is dragging you down,
You both may be using something, drugs booze, also sounds like you blame your self for her choices, your love and guilt can't leave her behind, as you want to try to change.
If I am not mistaken, you should find help for your self regardless, she may follow your example, if you take real action.
2007-11-04 11:08:17 · answer #6 · answered by jenny 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like emo song lyrics.
It's about love and death and teenage angst.
2007-10-31 12:22:58 · answer #7 · answered by amancalledj 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOU HAVE A TALENT i am telling u.
well the poem seems like a love poem coz it talks about love but generally the poem talks about a vampire creature not liking what he is and he is trying to convince his love that he loves her and if she would join him
2007-10-31 12:24:11 · answer #8 · answered by lily 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
ooh, i thought it was an affair that was going ot end by suicide if they couldn't have there lover
very good. sounds like midieval gothic literature
2007-10-31 12:24:58 · answer #9 · answered by ✿❃❀❁✾ Stef ♐ ✿❃❀❁✾ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You explained it in your first line, You said, "I accept the truth about us"...so you're expressing your realizations of your relationship...
2007-10-31 12:27:36 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋