I have written a short piece about bereavement, friendship and hope. Would you please critique?

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I have written a short piece about bereavement, friendship and hope. Would you please critique?

Grateful for thoughts, comments, ideas and criticism of this short piece I have written about friendship, bereavement and hope. I wrote it recently and it deals with what happened when my best friend died of Aids in 1992.
Here is the direct link to my short piece:
http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2006/08/in-his-waking-life-he-felt-steve-hadnt.html

2007-10-29 16:14:54 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends

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Not bad, I have a different take, but that doesn't need to be addressed, the message was clear, deep stuff, keep it up.....

2007-10-30 07:15:26 · answer #1 · answered by Brutal Honesty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Very nice and very sweet.

2007-10-29 23:21:14 · answer #2 · answered by patches 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋