Male monkeys goes bald as they get older just as some men does.
2007-10-29 14:26:34 · 47 answers · asked by :)) ♥ 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
the verbs don't match the subjects.
should be
Male monkeys go bald as they get older, just as some men do.
2007-10-29 14:28:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
The correct answer should be:Male monkeys go bald as they get older, just as some men do
2007-10-29 14:33:26 · answer #2 · answered by Spentaz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It should read: Male monkeys go bald as they get older, just as some men do.
2007-10-29 14:30:28 · answer #3 · answered by turkeybrooknj 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It should be:
Male monkeys go bald as they get older; just as some men do.
2007-10-29 14:30:03 · answer #4 · answered by stjoseph5 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Male monkeys go bald as they grow older, just as some men do.
2007-10-29 14:29:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Male monkeys goes bald as they get older just as some men does.
GOES= go DOES=do verbs dont match
2007-10-29 14:29:32 · answer #6 · answered by PBhockeydude 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Male monkeys go bald as they get older just as some men do.
2007-10-29 14:29:19 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Male monkeys go bald as they get older, just as some men do too.
2007-10-29 14:28:58 · answer #8 · answered by UnboundClouds 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The verbs have to be in the same tense and agree with the subject.
It should be,
Male monkeys go bald as they get older, just as some men do.
I changed goes to go and does to do and by doing this I made the subjects agree with the verb and I made them in the same tense. I also added a comma between older and just.
2007-10-29 14:35:51 · answer #9 · answered by tweetie545 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It should be Male monkeys go bald, as they get older just as some men do.
2007-10-29 14:29:21 · answer #10 · answered by Grumpy Cat 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's not just the sentence that's wrong, it's the question too. The question should be: "What's wrong with this sentence?" The answer is: "Male monkeys go bald as they get older just as some men do."
2007-10-29 14:29:15 · answer #11 · answered by Fuzzy 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋