Thou Shall Never Know....
Secretes I hide
locked tight inside
If only I
chance to comply
A bitter wish
I wish for thee
A dream I dream
most secretly
One of the pleasures
maybe pain?
After exposure
we speak again?
Sinful yes,
blasphemous?
Yes, I admit
it does break trust
Still, he
who doesn’t know
I fear to show,
(just turn and go)
I thought,
perchance that I?
was so bold?
now I deny
Someone I seek
I’ve never told
so sadly
thou shall never know.......
2007-10-29 13:19:10 · 9 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh Ninnnnnnnggggggggg (wink)
2007-10-29 13:54:20 · update #1
THAT IS VERY NICE, SAD AS HELL. BUT BEAUTIFUL WORDS.
LOL HAHAHA, I HAD TO COME BACK, I DIDN'T ANSWER THE QUESTION. THERE ARE ALWAYS GOING BE SOMEONE A PERSON ADMIRES FOR 1 REASON OR THE OTHER. ITS ONLY HUMAN NATURE. JUST DON'T GET ADMIRATION MIXED-UP WITH
HOT, HOT, HOT..........HAVE A GREATNIGHT
2007-10-29 13:47:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful poem.
Yes, I have an admirer at work, he sends me cards and flowers. He doesn't know I found out who he is, so I am leaving it his secret. I think it's very romantic. And yes, I admire someone, but it's out of the question romantically, so that one remains secret as well. I, like Dondi, also admire your poetry and character. Live life to the max.
2007-10-30 03:43:59 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very beautifully written poem
it is very sad too.
with words like until we speak again
because of the pain.
I too had a secret admirer at one point
from my 360
he was a poet
if anyone know it.
he is no longer there
towards other people's feeling he never cared
I don't want to mention his name
but he should be ashamed.
2007-10-31 10:34:26 · answer #3 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If I have a secret admirer, it's a well kept secret. But I do admire many people and for many reasons. Many of them know not my feelings, many do. I admire you for your poetry and for your strength of character. I might say I admire you for your body, but that would border on unacceptable behavior, so I won't. Wonderfully written poem, I enjoyed reading it.
2007-10-30 02:33:41 · answer #4 · answered by Dondi 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Shad you always write the most special; poems and many are like words and ways which i and many of us feel or have felt on..yes i do have a one i admire ; but he;ll never know as he;s into his own world per say...
2007-10-29 14:51:07 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Can you tell the character of someone through his written words? You need to see the eyes for that.
I admire you for putting it out there!
2007-10-29 17:52:34 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
i don't hav 1 but im ur secret admirer 4 sure!
2007-10-29 18:17:57 · answer #7 · answered by aditi 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
i wished it were me..very touching poem..again..
2007-10-29 13:42:28 · answer #8 · answered by ? 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
,,,both, and both are a secret,,,.
take care.
D.
2007-10-29 15:29:34 · answer #9 · answered by dorian 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋