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We all dressed up for Halloween
My wife looks like a dance hall queen
She says to get a real good treat
You need a look that can't be beat

So we went to a costume party
I think some went to party hearty
So when you think you've seen it all
I think you missed this costume ball

The party had a rule in place
That in the end you show your face
Well my wife was drinking her red wine
And she was feeling really fine

So when came time for show and tell
My wife yells out Oh what the hell
She started dancing on a table
But she was drunk and wasn't able

I quess the room was spinning round
And off that thing she did come down
Just where she landed I can't say
But by his smile it made his day

Then what she said made his face read
I think she thought she was in bed
She says she thinks she isn't ready
She justs wants her litte teddy

2007-10-29 13:15:21 · 4 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

4 answers

Thumbs Up!!:))

2007-10-29 13:18:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

There are less entertaining verses. On scale, I`d give it a 6.

2007-10-29 13:19:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Hmmmmm, don't know Gary. Maybe to some. Good try.

2007-10-29 13:22:30 · answer #3 · answered by Irish 7 · 0 0

It's ok. Not bad.

2007-10-29 13:33:51 · answer #4 · answered by Meghan 3 · 0 0

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