History coursework?

Question

We have ben told to do 5 paragraphs.
-Intro
-Crimes
-Police Force
-Punishment
-conclusion

I have just finished the first three and was wondering what you thought of it, if i've missed anything out or simply said something wrong, also im having a think about the final two paragraphs, what could i include in Punishment. And i really don't have a clue about conclusion, i think it's meant to be opinion, or is it fact? I'm not sure!
Please help me.

This is what ive done so far:


Describe Law and Order in Late 19th Century

By the end of the 19th century crime was declining, this is because of the introduction of the police force and prisons. There are three key elements to law and order, these are crime, law enforcement and punishment.
The actual amount of crime in the late 19th century was actually declining but because of the high media attention people were hearing more than they would have normally, so they thought it was increasing. Violent crimes and murder made u

Answer 1

By the end of the 19th century crime was declining. This is because of the introduction of a police force and prisons. There are three key elements to law and order: crime, law enforcement and punishment.
The actual amount of crime in the late 19th century was actually declining, but because of the high media attention, people were hearing more than they would have normally, so they thought it was increasing. Violent crimes and murder made u . . . . .

A few suggested corrections above.
Looks like you ran out of space.
For punishment you could write about the new electric chair which was supposed to be a humane form of capital punishment. That was at the end of the 19th century in the U.S. (I assume you are writing about the U.S.)
The conclusion should be a few sentences summarizing the main points in the paper - such as the reduction of crime but the increased reporting in the media which made people simply think things had gotten worse.