hay guys i sack and cant write more than 10 lines please help me by giving me some hits becoause i have to write an eassy about 1 and 1/4 page and i have already 20 lines plzzz help me. please if you will not help dont write any compliment that why i want help i am here to get help not get insult by any one.
i have to write an eassy with the titel A Healthy Society
Discuss the implications of modern lifestyle in an affluent society.
You should consider aspects like: health, economy, governmental guidelines and individual responsibility.
i started to write abit about society then agian i sack please help .
2007-10-28 11:47:48 · 3 answers · asked by christe_pol 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Ok What is a healthy society? Consider modern eating habits (obesity, junk food, diabetes etc). Economy.(The economy?). Spending habits - debt, credit cards, Over spending on things you don't need - eg fashion victims.
Government guidelines are OK, but who follows them? Like here in UK they say u are supposed to eat 5 different fruit/veg portions every day. Who does? Like smoking ban in public buildings. Individual responsibility is doing what you feel is right to make society healthier. - not driving a gas guzzler, recycling, nor getting into lots of debt. Hope this helps. One other thing, though, honey. Not wishing to be rude, but you need to check your spelling. Hey. suck. hints.because.essay. insulted title again.
2007-10-28 12:01:28 · answer #1 · answered by SKCave 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you do not want people to insult you, type your question as if you had some grasp of the English language. As far as writing the paper, if you plan on writing it in the same poor English that you used here, don't even bother writing it. As a teacher I would fail you either way.
If you actually care about your education and future life, here are some tips on essay writing.
For the required length you could use a simple 5 or 6 paragraph essay. Write an introduction paragraph stating what you are trying to prove in your essay. Then write 3 or 4 body paragraphs, each stating a reason that supports your thesis statement and proof to back it up. Your conclusion should be a restatement of the introduction as well as summing up the points you made in each body paragraph.
2007-10-28 12:02:30 · answer #2 · answered by dare to be disturbed 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Everyone is trying to help you, and pointing out errors in your spelling is part of that help.
The title of your essay and the length of your essay are to your advantage because it will be a short essay and the topic is given.
What do you think makes a healthy society? How do you maintain a healthy society, what must people, the government , and an individual do in order to have a healthy society and keep it healthy? Will it mean changing some of our lifestyle, our routines, our habits??
You might want to end your essay with what you, yourself, are doing to help keep society healthy, even if it means being healthy yourself.
I hope this helps.
2007-10-29 01:00:08 · answer #3 · answered by curiousN 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋