Fertility
Written by Semper Fi Reborn
Her name was Fertility,
And she was with child.
Having been blessed by God,
With a smile,
So wonderous and luminous,
Radiance like the sun.
Wear shades when you look,
Or retinas may scorch,
And shrivel blowing hastily away,
In the winds of change.
For change is in her.
She is with child ,
Remember?
She has a planet to populate.
The water in her belly,
Does surely irrigate,
The growing fetus.
How God completes us.
She will soon be ripe enough,
To bring forth the fruits of her labor,
While in labor,
She cries out in contraction,
After contraction,
After contraction.
Then a small cry is the result of this action.
She is now a Mother, a Mommy, a Hey Ma!
Look see!
She is not only Fertility!
She is now Tranquility!
2007-10-28 09:50:57 · 13 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Some people aren't capable of looking beyond words to capture the true meaning of something. How unfortunate for them. I really liked it :D
2007-10-28 17:44:39 · answer #1 · answered by LADY beautiful mind (is sexy) 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's interesting, And Pretty Well-Written.
But "Wear shades when you look,
Or retinas may scorch,"
Kind of made me cringe, If It's possible to change that...?
Other than that, Good poem :]
2007-10-28 17:15:28 · answer #2 · answered by MandaMassacre 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Kinda sounds Like GOD Is describing HIS Miracle.....
2007-10-28 20:40:22 · answer #3 · answered by minnetta c 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's quite a few contractions short....LOL!!......but seriously, it's a lovely poem. I'm going to e-mail it to my daughter, who recently gave birth to my first grandchild. (((Semper Fi)))
2007-10-28 20:30:52 · answer #4 · answered by beano™ 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very intense
2007-10-28 16:58:59 · answer #5 · answered by ione_thestar1 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My goodness, this is very nice. I love it!!! Wow, you're definitely gifted. God bless your work.
2007-10-28 17:35:41 · answer #6 · answered by . 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Wow. That's quite the poem. I don't know how to answer.....
:D
2007-10-28 16:56:17 · answer #7 · answered by *luna's lover* 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it perfectly describes the reasons,
that I am glad that I am a man.
2007-10-28 18:06:37 · answer #8 · answered by Hannah's Grandpa 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
your ready to publish i'm going to send this to oprah.
2007-10-29 00:51:31 · answer #9 · answered by joe c 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, this doesn't do it for me. Frankly, it sounds stupid and doesn't go anywhere. 1/5
2007-10-28 17:23:29 · answer #10 · answered by imperialism 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋