If you've read my previous poems, you know I love my brother a lot! His 3rd birthday is on Saturday, so I wrote him this poem, what do you think? His name is Dallas.
Happy 3rd
3 whole years, passed so fast,
and you still know I care.
Your soft and smooth hands,
now worn from the adventurous games you play.
The day has finally come,
I no longer consider you a baby.
You're now my boy, my growing boy!
God it's hard to say, but you've gotten here to quickly!
Though you are just my brother,
I care for you as if you were my own.
You are now on a journy, that I feel I no longer can help you with.
Growing up. I love you and wish you the best of luck.
-Bailey
2007-10-28 05:29:23 · 8 answers · asked by Bailey 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Poems don't have to rhyme.
2007-10-28 05:34:53 · update #1
Please say whatever you want.
2007-10-28 06:24:03 · update #2
Thanks so much!
I was wondering if you think he would understand it, or if I should just hold it off until he's older?
2007-10-28 06:42:41 · update #3
Wow,I have tears in my eyes. That is so sweet and kind....Beautiful poem...now stop making me cry!
2007-10-28 05:33:07 · answer #1 · answered by Scooter_The_Squirrels_Wifey 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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A poem for my brother's 3rd birthday?
If you've read my previous poems, you know I love my brother a lot! His 3rd birthday is on Saturday, so I wrote him this poem, what do you think? His name is Dallas.
Happy 3rd
3 whole years, passed so fast,
and you still know I care.
Your soft and smooth hands,
now worn from the...
2015-08-14 19:48:43 · answer #2 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think a poem for a 3-year-old should rhyme. I mean, he's certainly not old enough to appreciate abstract art. If you want to get him interested in poetry, you'll need to make the words appeal to his ears. 50 gazillion books by Dr. Seuss can't be wrong.
2007-10-28 07:08:24 · answer #3 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Wow that's amazing i wish i could write that good of a poem!
I think Dallas will love it! great job!
2007-10-28 05:33:10 · answer #4 · answered by poopsicles 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, it was really good and I think you should give it to him, he will understand it's his birthday.
2007-10-29 08:35:39 · answer #5 · answered by kelsie_92 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
super good for a child on his birthday hope he grows up asking you to do the poems for him school is not that far away.
2007-10-28 05:34:59 · answer #6 · answered by ? 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its really good. give it to him. he'll love it.
2007-10-28 08:50:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow you sound like GREAT big sister tears in eyes and i .am not afraid to admit
2007-10-28 05:35:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
its really good u should give it to him like put it in a frame and stuff he would really like it
2007-10-28 05:33:12 · answer #9 · answered by !=]<3Single And Proud Of It&l 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dear, it does not rhym ! Call it a letter !!!
2007-10-28 05:33:27 · answer #10 · answered by lonewolf 7 · 2⤊ 4⤋