In romeo and Juliet they eloped right? We have to do 6 articles. I'm doing one on that. I Which title (at the top) sounds better?
Or suggestions would be great. If that didn't make since, tell me and Ill re-word it.
Thanks
2007-10-28 04:27:04 · 3 answers · asked by dark_angel_360 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I think that the shocking elopement is more grammatically correct. The other one is grammatically wrong and because it ryhmes it sound quite weird.
2007-10-28 04:37:05 · answer #1 · answered by Connie22 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Shocking Elopement since it is more in keeping with Shakespearean style. A twist would be "The Secret the Priest Kept". Good Luck!
2007-10-28 04:44:06 · answer #2 · answered by Walking on Sunshine 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My dear, as a professional writer I say that:
"The Shocking Elopement" rings very well.
But, as good as are your title skills, you fall short on capitalization and grammar.
"....didn't make since." doesn't make sense for proper spelling.
And, it's better English to say "....they eloped, correct?"
Doing a good job of editing a finished work is as important as the work itself.
2007-10-28 04:43:25 · answer #3 · answered by ha_mer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋