In a way, the Old-New Synagogue is related to any other sacred temple or church because each of those places have important religous value to them and are usally very old. These important places all have some kind of meaning to them and are protected so that it can be seen for many generations to come. The Old-New Synagogue is just one of them, but all it takes is one building to show...
Help me complete this sentence. Please!
2007-10-26 02:45:57 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
...the religious and cultural traditions that are valued by the Orthodox Jews who have worshiped here for centuries.
One correction...each of those places has important religious value...
Use has not have because your pronoun antecedent is EACH not places. Since each is singular, you need the singular verb HAS.
Hope that helps.
2007-10-26 02:59:43 · answer #1 · answered by DJ76 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You use "them" too much. To what does "them" refer, the houses of worship, or to the people who worship there? Think about that in re-reading and re-writing. Look at the sentence in question. "The Old-New Synagogue is just one of them..." You need to replace "them" with a specific noun.
The Old-New Synagogue is just one of them, but all it takes is one building to show the value the faithful place on a proper place to worship their god.
2007-10-26 09:56:46 · answer #2 · answered by jack of all trades 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the history in this phenomenal town
2007-10-26 09:54:00 · answer #3 · answered by ♥mee mee♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋