if you have a better way to word it, please give me suggestions! thanks a lot!
sentence:
I am eager to continue learning and begin applying my passion to the treatment and curing of people’s diseases.
2007-10-25 16:02:22 · 10 answers · asked by JZ 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
What you have is great! Vary straightforward, and shows where you priorities lie. If I was to slightly change it though, possibly this option (your sentence seems awesome to me though!) :
"I am eager to learn and begin applying my passion to the treatment and curing of people's diseases."
I would wait a day or two and look at it again and see if it still meets your needs.
2007-10-25 16:10:56 · answer #1 · answered by Jaycie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have tried to word it differently to mean the same thing but it seems to be tailored to your specific goals. It sounds grammatically correct to me.
Or you could say, "I am eagerly continuing my education so I may begin applying my passion for treating and curing people's diseases."
2007-10-25 16:17:16 · answer #2 · answered by prettyplease 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am eager to continue learning and applying my passion in the treatment of disease.
It sounds ackward to me as first stated. Asked my wife, she got straight A's in high school and college. Her sister teaches English. So she is usually right on when it comes to words.
good luck.
2007-10-25 16:21:04 · answer #3 · answered by Fordman 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
save it uncomplicated and boil it down. Use the previous uncomplicated instead of a applicable annoying and ditch the preposition on the top of the sentence. Your sentence isn't incorrect, even though it ought to be more advantageous. I forgot to put in all of the well mannered stuff that often starts or ends an email. I forgot to apply all of the well mannered stuff that often starts or ends an email. I forgot to apply the well mannered stuff that often starts or ends an email.
2016-11-09 12:06:25 · answer #4 · answered by joerling 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should add "to" between and - begin
I am eager to continue learning and to begin applying my passion to the treatment and curing of people’s diseases.
just sounds better to me :)
2007-10-25 16:06:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me.
2007-10-25 16:06:46 · answer #6 · answered by Cute Mom of 2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i agree with The InGLeSH MaYJur. You should vote hers as the best answer unless anyone has a better one.
2007-10-25 16:13:11 · answer #7 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it AS IS.
2007-10-25 16:10:59 · answer #8 · answered by Mike 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good.
2007-10-25 16:05:13 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it sounds great! :)
2007-10-25 16:06:03 · answer #10 · answered by Katie E 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋