Boy: It’s seemed like yesterday,
Us holding each other,
Never letting go,
Just like yesterday.
Girl: It’s been a ten years now,
Working to live,
Having little time for myself,
It’s been ten years.
His insane passion,
Her successful life,
He had been searching,
She has forgotten.
Boy: I will never forget,
The days we spent,
The sweetness of your kiss,
I will never forget.
Girl: I can’t stay in the past,
I told him I had to go,
Why do I remember now?
I can’t stay in the past.
He finds her sleeping,
She dreaming of the past,
He wakes her with a kiss
She wakes in a panic.
Boy: I have found you!
Your lips still have its sweetness,
How I’ve missed you so!
I have found you!
Girl: Damian!
Why have you come here?
Why do you kiss me?
Damian…
He grabs her by the arm,
She yells and panics,
He pins her to the wall,
She beings to cry.
Boy: Angel, I love you,
I have searched everywhere,
Greendale, Jacksonville, Houston,
Angel, I love you.
Girl: Let me go!
You should have never came,
You don’t understand!
Let me go!
He lets go in shock,
She crawls away,
He is silent,
She can’t get away
Boy: I will never let go,
I have you’re heart,
And you have mine
I will never let go!
Girl: No!
I let go a long time ago,
I have moved on!
No!
He reaches of his gun
She trys to run away
But she was no match for the bullet.
And he was not match for the truth.
2007-10-25 07:23:41 · 5 answers · asked by Ripsi W 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Zoey, Freckles and Tsunami.....I hope you guyz enjoy this one. Took me a few hours but I think I got it the way I want it. Any advice tho on how to make it better feel free to tell me.
2007-10-25 07:24:46 · update #1
As always you guyz still Rock!
2007-10-25 07:26:09 · update #2
GOOD POEM I MAY SAY !!!!!!!!!!!!
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if it is not copied then iy is really good
from today i m ur fan young lady
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keep it RUNNING !!!!!!
all ur feelings have poured from ur heart
it is really good
hope i helped
please feel free to contact me
2007-10-25 07:53:23 · answer #1 · answered by friendly_guy 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I style worry like a penny below my tongue A copper disc, the etchings dwindled, lengthy previous [Blood drips in my veins my pulse is powerful] self contradictory My lower back slides down the wall i'm on the floor i'm going to die here, then [The circle will finished] What circle [The airborne dirt and mud i attempted to disguise below my ft] why imaginative and prescient blurs i'm swallowed via my sweat Footsteps, then I shrink into myself Shadows flow, Then fall upon my face Defeat swells in my lungs now no longer risk-free devoid of words we communicate [i've got faith shame] shame or indignity As willingly I upward thrust to dying's include] As willingly as what [Surrendering to destiny One attempts to thrill] ? somewhat? who's that this secret guy or woman Failing which you fall upon your knees Begging on your existence from men like those there's no longer something to do yet feed the beast Pennies line the course on which we walk They fall from in my mouth and that i will't communicate] Sorry, too plenty artwork.
2016-12-30 05:27:05 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was really good i enjoyed it i like stuff like this i couldnt' open the one email. i assume was about this same one. i really like this type of stuff. the unknown abit scary and chancey that is neat just great. i guess you have alot of imagination. i never could write poems and i doubt i ever will i tried once and thought it was good but heck it wasn't so much. i like dark stuff its neat and so interesting go on. (suzy)
2007-10-25 14:05:53 · answer #3 · answered by Tsunami 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow I'm impressed! this is really good. You did a good job of keeping your readers entertained till the very end. It was very intriguing. Great job!
2007-10-25 08:12:00 · answer #4 · answered by freckles579 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
if your question is what are our comments on this poem...
here is my answer :)
it was good, i liked it. Like a small scene from a play.
2007-10-25 07:30:50 · answer #5 · answered by MS.veronica 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋