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in my school were doing rap battles and they dissed my homie doughboy so were trying to get back at them THERES THE RAP DOWN THERE. i need to continue it anyone wanna help? i also need a word that rhymes with mascot tell me if you think its funny and make fun of his china nd fatness ...do you like the rap?



Ima keep it simple, aint gunna
Write an essay. Yeah Doughboys fat
But Sergio all you do is play with balls
You cant get pussay, atleast doughboy
Can afford buzainz Yeah hell fuxk
Her then make you suck his remainz.
And if you don’t understand that
Line, it means lick my cumx Now
Sergio stop hating cuz atleast I can
Get some. And you marlon what
You talking about me being fat?
Have you seen your chin? Let me
Not even begin. Na na but wait
Look at little fatboy marlon with
His braces looking for pussay
In all the wrong places. Why you
Think you still cant get a girl? Cuz
Your fat and got 2 chins you make
A girls wanna hurl. Hey now maybe
The marlins can take you as their
Mascot

2007-10-24 11:37:46 · 1 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

1 answers

When you go out,
Make sure you wear an Ascot.

A lot of what you're saying in your rap is hard to follow. It makes little sense and doesn't flow very well.

The first line is too much of a stretch. Leave out the part about balls. That will make it flow better.

"At least doughboy can afford brains"
Brains aren't something a person has to purchase, so that makes no sense.

Your rhymes are a mess, so it's best you just not try or you may be the one wiping the tears from your eye, yo.
I never wrote a rap in my life, but if I cared enough about you punk, it I'd cut you with my verbal knife.

2007-10-24 11:41:28 · answer #1 · answered by Mickey Mouse Spears 7 · 1 2

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