This a song wrote a few minutes ago. I just want to know it ya'll think it's good. all want to know is if have talent at all. so this the song it's "So Pretty," i don't have enough space to write it all but this a good sample of the song
(intro)
Your face girl...(I love it)
Your a fine girl... (that's right)
your simply perfect, girl, girl, girl
Hey did I tell you that your...
(chorus)
So pretty, your so pretty
So pretty, your so pretty
such a beautiful girl
your so pretty, your so pretty
your so pretty, your so pretty
Hell yeah, your so pretty girl
(verse)
Nobody needs to cut you up for surgery
I like you just the way you are
Now just listen, i'm being sincere
All i do is look a your face
and see heaven in earth
it's like a million bright diamonds put together to shine
(damn girl your so fine)
hey I just gotta have you
HEY...
(bridge)
your face is so fine baby
your thigh is so big baby
your smile shines baby
what i'm sayin is...
(chorus)
2007-10-24 09:19:13 · 31 answers · asked by MathRocks 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That's deep. i really like it.
you should get it recorded id like to hear it
2007-10-24 09:22:29 · answer #1 · answered by I Need Help 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
it's downright pathetic!!!!! plus that thing with surgery and love you just the way you are sounds like that Timbaland song - the way I are. At this stage they're just really simple lyrics, anyone could write those, it's the way that it would sound that matters... So until you become a famous rapper or whatever and I can see your face on MTV, stop writing these ridiculous lyrics!!!
2007-10-24 16:25:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Your song's repetitious
But otherwise fine
Maybe you could change it
With a little more time
It's kind of long
But again kind of neat
And I bet when you sing it
It's got a nice beat
So continue to write
Because you're doing fine
But next time you try
Use a little more rhyme.
2007-10-24 16:28:51 · answer #3 · answered by goodbye 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Anything considered "good" will stand the test of time.
If it still being listened to by a substantial number of people in 50 to 100 years' time then it may considered to be good.
2007-10-24 16:23:42 · answer #4 · answered by dmb06851 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋
not really feeling it.But some record company Will buy it because today music just isn't written good or song good by people .Its just overly sexual and violent now music today. It was violent when I was teen back in the 90's but its worse now.
2007-10-24 16:29:20 · answer #5 · answered by ~~Pinky & the Brain~~ 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I write a lot of music myself cause I'm in a group, and I hate to sound critical but it could use a lot of work. I don't really like it.
2007-10-24 16:27:46 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Sounds desperate
2007-10-24 16:22:30 · answer #7 · answered by Ninny Imposter 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I suppose it's a decent song, but it's kind of repetitive. I would ditch the line about the surgery, it kind of blows the direction of the song.
2007-10-24 16:23:30 · answer #8 · answered by ElMagnifico 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Did you write for your girlfriend or something. Maybe you should tone down the your so pretty.
2007-10-24 16:24:52 · answer #9 · answered by lou lou 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
WOW that is a hot song were did you come up with those words it is wow!!!!!!!!!!!! that almost made me cry its so romantic it must a been for a special girl right?
2007-10-24 16:29:38 · answer #10 · answered by Emily S 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
people that listen to rap and r&b will probably like it, but (i'm sorry!!) i don't, really...i just don't think songs about this topic ever seem like something really inspired the writer...
2007-10-24 16:23:25 · answer #11 · answered by rt1290 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋