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sell out

She sits there on her velvet throne,
With blood she rules, the evil queen.
Don't you see the darkeness dear,
The cursed night has now wiped out the dawn.

Revenge for all the lives you took,
Our agony is just what you feel.
Pain is just a fact of life,
Your life is now complete disaster.

Cut off your nose to spite your face,
Forgiveness is made for the weak.
Before the rain of heavens pain,
I dare you now, just don't complain.

You've torn out my heart again,
We've done this dance so many times.
I have for you just one small question,
How many times will your dignity sell for a dime?

Give in to your dark desires,
Your old cuts and sores reopened.
Get down now, on your knees and beg,
It's so funny, no one ever leaves here alive.

2007-10-24 06:43:45 · 5 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

5 answers

Did you ever wonder if the whole reason you are put in the situation of relying on mass transit is because it leaves you with the Devil's playthings? Because you have written some very intriguing things on the ride to and from...have you ever almost missed your stop because you were so absorbed? Because I probably would be just reading your work. I wish you would go on and publish all of it in one book so that I could buy it and be content instead of wondering what I am missing...

2007-10-24 09:24:57 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

yes, judging from your mass transit poem, it makes a great environment. you can people watch and even though you're surrounded by people, you can keep to yourself and write down your thoughts.

2007-10-24 06:50:32 · answer #2 · answered by ? 6 · 1 0

Good piece of dark poetry.

2007-10-25 01:10:40 · answer #3 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0 0

great poem 'and i think mass transit does work as you;ve written some great poetry on there...

2007-10-24 07:11:47 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1 0

wow, great poem. very dark and sinister. good job...

2007-10-24 06:51:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

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