well, the sentence itself is awkward, but, no, there should be a comma there instead of a semi-colon.
2007-10-24 04:25:09
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answered by Nathan K 3
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I think the word, "awakened" might be more appropriate.
You do not have enough phrases or clauses for there to be need of a semicolon, I would however, use a comma.
The word, "well" is not necessary, I would leave it out of the sentence.
Whenever, I'm typing and not sure of punctuation, I usually use Spell Check in WORD and it lets me know if the punctuation or grammar it not quite right, it offers
suggestions.
I have found a simple thing that I do all the time, I'm sure it's because, when I hear people talk, I try to write dialog. After writing dialog for a couple of hours, I find that I over use words, for example, I use"then", "that", "like", "well", " I mean" and a few more words. I go ahead and type the sentence, look back to see if the sentence makes sense without these extra words. I'll bet you'll never guess, the sentence actually sounds better without them. You might try this sometimes, I believe you will be much happier with the sentence structure.
2007-10-24 04:57:32
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answered by ♫ Bubastes, Cat Goddess♥ 7
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I think a comma would be preferred, the semi-colon seems awkward. I always think of a semi-colon as a longer pause than a comma, use it when one sentence transitions to an idea that is somewhat not totally related to the subject but where a period makes no sense.
2007-10-24 04:31:07
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answered by Pfo 7
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It is acceptable, but it would be better to use a comma.
2007-10-24 04:28:07
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answered by HopeGrace 4
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i believe it is...thats where I would have put it.
but don't take my word on that...im not the best with grammer.
2007-10-24 04:26:20
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answered by Anonymous
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darling, marks (e.i. .,!?:; etc.) should be after the word, no space after the word.. alright?
2007-10-24 04:27:54
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answered by mai2 2
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i think it should just be comma(,)
2007-10-24 04:25:55
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answered by jixme 4
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that seems fine to me:)
2007-10-24 04:25:15
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answered by whynothugsomeone 3
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