Have you read the edited version of "Ty's Update" poem?

Question

Dr. Dimwit, can you give a
little something for my ale
a tiny lift of this or that for
I am feeling mighty frail

Dr. Dimwit, are you listening?
Should I call 911?
Just a shot is all I ask, a pill?
a dose? I’m so hum drum

Dr. Dimwit look my way!
I haven’t got all frappin’ day!
Today’s the day I have to face
and for my son be truly brave

Dr’. Dimwit do you expect me to
hold my head up high
while my baby boy has surgery?
I don’t want to cry!

Dr. Dimwit you’re fool,
a heartless moronic little boob!
To sit and watch a mother break,
to give her nothing for her ale

Dr. Dimwit, sir, I swear,
if he’s not in the best care
I will shoot you up and lay you out
and take your heart! Sound fair?

Oh, what’s that Dr. Dimwit?
Oh, your hearing aid’s turned down?
No, well I was asking for
a little “help me out?”

“*Here’s a little sedative
Mrs. Brown, are you alright?
Your son Ty’s in recovery,
his surgery went fine*”

Worried mama, boo. not a junkie.

The ending hasn't been written yet, Dondi, but we'll try to make it a happy one for you.

Answer 1

I, also can see the worried mother in this poem, but it seems to end on a bit of an up-note with surgery finished and recovery eminent. I like stories with happy endings.

Answer 2

This took me returned to the faculty room in school Kathy as quickly as we've been all reading The Rime of the classic Mariner. Your tale had the comparable eerie feeling, I experienced formerly then. Thank nyou for the journey returned in time, and likewise on your ghost deliver

Answer 3

nice, i think i took it as the mother of the child was a junkie and wanted her own drugs or it could also mean that she could stand the thought of not having her son come out of surgery okay so she wanted to be sedated to cope with pain.

either way, this is a really good poem.

Answer 4

I could almost feel the anxiety in this one, beautiful.

Answer 5

Awesome poem, thanks for sharing. And to answer your question, no, I had not read it.