Hey, my name is Katie. As your student council rep. I will do my best to represent you, my fellow classmates. I would make a good choice because I have had many experiences with leadership, and much, much more! In this office I will raise your ideas to the student council to make our school even better! Please vote for me Katie C. and you will get the very best!
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2007-10-23 16:00:54 · 20 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Hey, my name is Katie. As your student council rep. I will do my best to represent you, my fellow classmates. I would make a good choice because I have had many experiences with leadership, and much, much more! In this office I will raise your ideas to the student council to make our school even better! Please vote for me Katie C. and you will get the very best!
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Hey, my name is Katie [last name]. This year I am running for student council representative. As your student council representative, I promise to represent you, my fellow classmates, in the best ways possible. I would make a good choice because I have had many experiences with leadership and _____ [it'd be better to list some more of your skills]. In this office, I will support your ideas a hundred percent in an effort to make our school a better place to learn in. Please vote for me, Katie C! You wont regret it!
hope that helps.
2007-10-23 16:07:29 · answer #1 · answered by Barney! 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hey, my name is Katie. As your student council rep, I will do my best to represent you my fellow classmates. I WILL be a good choice because I have had many experiences with leadership, and much, much more! In this office -- I will raise your ideas to the student council to make our school an even better place! Please vote for me "Katie C." and you will get the very best results!
I made some corrections in there.
2007-10-23 16:05:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2016-10-22 22:08:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds pretty good...but I think you need a more attention-grabbing introduction. I'm sorry I can't think of a good example for you at the moment...exciting intros were always a weak point for me.
I agree that you should detail your leadership experience a little bit (but not enough to bore people). and what is "much much more"?
2007-10-23 16:09:42 · answer #4 · answered by turkeyjerky 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Even if I still went to school, I'd so not vote for you. Your speech needs work -- it's too vague. What exactly is "many experiences with leadership"? Give me concrete, verifiable examples. With graphs and charts. A PowerPoint presentation would be nice.
2007-10-23 16:04:59 · answer #5 · answered by Resident Heretic 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
What is the "much, much more" of which you speak?
What are your experiences with leadership that you talk of?
What actions will you take to provide the best representation?
2007-10-23 16:04:23 · answer #6 · answered by LadyRebecca 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't just tell the voters that you have leadership experience. You need to tell the voters what kind of leadership experiences you've had.
2007-10-23 16:11:31 · answer #7 · answered by Eugene 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would give at least one example of your past leadership experience
2007-10-23 16:03:38 · answer #8 · answered by from HJ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would be more specific and have an example of something you have done (a statistic would be great as well) and a thing you want to achieve.
2007-10-23 16:06:40 · answer #9 · answered by Johnny 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well..you sound like a robot.
Show them the real you and what you're made of,
because if you're a hypocrite and they vote for you,
they'll be mad.
Good luck! ;)
2007-10-23 16:03:46 · answer #10 · answered by chandee_international_beauty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋