In the movie The Shining, Jack Nicholson gives a vivid performance as a man sinking into madness. He suffers at first from mild hallucinations. Then he has drink in an imaginary bar. Finally, he chases his wife through a deserted hotel.
What is the writing flaw in this passage?
A. misspelling
B. comma misplacement
C. Excessive subordination
D. Absence of transitions
E. none of the above
2007-10-23 11:01:39 · 5 answers · asked by hey 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
B,C and D is my answer
2007-10-23 11:09:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hard to tell. There is a misspelling in there - but that could be a typo. So it might be A or it might be something else. There aren't any commas in it, so it isn't B, although maybe there should be, which means it could be C or D as well. Sorry, you're going to have to do some thinking about this.
2007-10-23 11:15:17 · answer #2 · answered by old lady 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
B.
2007-10-23 11:07:42 · answer #3 · answered by Max 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
missing a coma after movie
as well in the second and third sentence "he" is wrong (who is he ) need to put Nicholson
i know putting "he" is wrong but i dont know wats it called
theres something wrong about having all those "he"
hoped i helped and good luck
2007-10-23 11:11:50 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well its not A, B, or D.. so its either E or C and i think it probably C
2007-10-23 11:07:19 · answer #5 · answered by wizzzdork 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋