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Mom, I Love You


Round and round
I turn and spin
where to begin
and where to end?

Right and left and
right and wrong?
Up, down, in, out,
no strength, strong

Temper tantrums,
calming down
giggling laughter,
crying now

Creeping anger,
‘bout to blow
Holy sh*t
which way to go!?

All this nightly,
sleeping tightly
dreaming dreams
prob-matic, frightening!

Day seeps in,
{my distant friend}
singeing all
I am again

Soul’s forced to awaken
from demise
eyelids rise slowly
to a smiling surprise

A mug of hot java
comes in to view
along with a voice
“Mom, I love you”

2007-10-23 06:09:41 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

11 answers

HA!

You captured a lovely snapshot with this one.

Very good.

2007-10-23 07:18:53 · answer #1 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 1 0

A mothers love is so awesome as that love is returned from the child tenfold. I have had horrible days then come home to my boys running to meet me and throw their little arms around my neck I soon forget what the day was like for in the eyes of my children the world is alright.

2007-10-23 11:16:18 · answer #2 · answered by loretta 4 · 1 0

I love when you wake up in the morning and your kid is just staring at you an inch from your face! They are little terrors sometimes but you gotta love them!

2007-10-25 01:10:40 · answer #3 · answered by Jaimee 3 · 0 0

I love that poem a lot i will post it on my mirror to look at when my 10ys son is having one of his temper tantrums..

2007-10-23 09:26:58 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1 0

a moms frustrations and the precious love & innocence of a child.

2007-10-23 06:35:14 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

You gave me a smile, I hope someday to return it it threefold.

2007-10-23 07:00:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

They are absolutely the best!
Cute poem, it really captures them just the way they are.
Thank you!

2007-10-23 06:34:02 · answer #7 · answered by Llani 5 · 2 0

Kids are great, and little girls can be heart melters.

2007-10-23 09:20:18 · answer #8 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1 0

nothin like being a parent ...wouldnt of had it any other way...
you go ,,shad

2007-10-23 06:34:09 · answer #9 · answered by ? 6 · 2 0

ur a gr8 mom!

2007-10-25 03:19:23 · answer #10 · answered by aditi 3 · 0 0

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