I hear you whisper..
2007-10-23 04:42:51 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
down below your navel
not able to listen my baby
in my body
yet, I feel the movement
as if he or she is unforlding his/her arms to hug you around
2007-10-24 02:50:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I hear you whisper...
...but you're not really saying anything.
...words that you've whispered a thousand times before.
...and I look around, but realize that you're only in my dreams.
I guess it depends what way you want the person to interpret it. Is it a love poem? Is the person leaving you? Are you missing something? Hmmm... I hope my suggestions help.
2007-10-23 07:04:28 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I hear you whisper
in my dreams
it calls me forth
drifting through misty air
I see you sitting there
your eyes are soft
your arms outstretched
you whisper again
I am calmed by the sound
I come closer
your arms encircle me
the warmth is so strong
you whisper once more
I open my eyes
I am in your arms now
you kiss my cheek
I hear the whisper again
sweetly and softly
"I love you"
2007-10-23 06:45:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I don't want to influence you, but I can't do better than Dancing Bee's suggestion. That was awesome.
"magnetic words"
Good, good writing there. That is such evocative phrasing.
2007-10-23 05:47:40 · answer #4 · answered by Todd 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
underneath the truck.
But am I bothered? not a flying fish!
2007-10-23 10:10:33 · answer #5 · answered by synopsis 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
cascading upon the lumbering mountains of my memories.
2007-10-23 04:59:47 · answer #6 · answered by fire_side_2003 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
and it makes me shiver (i am good at this cause i am a poet)
2007-10-23 06:43:45 · answer #7 · answered by Rachael H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
...sweetly to me in the night.
2007-10-23 04:50:23 · answer #8 · answered by Debbie Queen of All ♥ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
...in my ear:dont make my love desapear!
2007-10-23 08:37:45 · answer #9 · answered by ♥Nancy-SRB♥ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My name and i listen so eagerly and in aww. xxx
2007-10-23 05:11:05 · answer #10 · answered by tony s 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋