Your gonna be the death of me.
Baby,mark my word,its a fact.
Your killing this girl,
Im not as strong as I act.
Your gonna pull the trigger,
A bullet for my heart.
The death of a girl,
Who couldnt finish what she'd start.
Shes gasping for a breath,
One more word is all she needs.
One word to explain
How your worth the tears that she bleeds.
Rewind those days,
Erase your face.
You left me for dead.
It was a one man race.
You win,you win.
As you see.
You were nothing more,
Than the death of me.
Baby,leave me for dead.
-Brittany Day.
[Please!Dont steal my poem!My heart and emotions are in this,please,dont claim this as your own!]
Please tell me what you think of it... =]
Hate it,like it,whichever.
2007-10-22 15:06:45 · 6 answers · asked by Baby<3Britt 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
very good
2007-10-22 15:16:09 · answer #1 · answered by richfraga 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you have a talent. I would keep up the writing.
2007-10-22 22:14:46 · answer #2 · answered by Jen 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Can't do this to me baby, just gotta get out, just gotta get right outta here...
Nice.
2007-10-22 22:12:24 · answer #3 · answered by 18th Angel 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not bad , it is clear and very understandable. good job.
2007-10-22 22:13:46 · answer #4 · answered by redd headd 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
like it
2007-10-22 22:11:38 · answer #5 · answered by pierronmom 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it, keep writing :)
2007-10-22 22:11:02 · answer #6 · answered by Silly Jilli :) 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋